A gentle cult

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Artificial Intelligence

This one took some kicking around. I'm struggling to allow myself to vary up the rhythm and stretch the pentameter. Tried a different rhyme scheme in the last sestet. I feel like it's a little disjointed, the CDECDE scheme? But I might just be overreacting because it's different. Always hard to see clearly right after I've finished something. I'd love to know what you think.