Artificial Intelligence

This one took some kicking around. I'm struggling to allow myself to vary up the rhythm and stretch the pentameter. Tried a different rhyme scheme in the last sestet. I feel like it's a little disjointed, the CDECDE scheme? But I might just be overreacting because it's different. Always hard to see clearly right after I've finished something. I'd love to know what you think.

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Artificial Intelligence

Three identical shirts... but one is best.
Certain that an unseen eye will check me,
Have to make sure I do this correctly,
But if I'm perfect... whom have I impressed?

I must not flinch when they hurt me in jest,
Must not make eye contact so directly,
Try to see that not all 'no's reject me.
I wonder if I'd pass a Turing test.

Prick me and I bleed, but I may not cry.
Tickle me - no, that'll make me cry too.
I've never found a place where I belong.
Know the right answers, but I don't know why,
Gets harder to speak the more I try to...
Pretty sure this machine's wired all wrong.

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